To lose something would be losing. Loose is for loosening a rope or grip on something.
I understand the emphasis however by adding an extra 'o' to match the lengthy verse. Two 'o's would do it better justice for the grammar nazis :)
I think it's "tongue of fire" not "eternal fire"
It's been corrected already - good job!
The lyrics are correct except for the typo. The word is losing, not loosing.
the lyrics are RIGHT!!!!!!!!!
IT is "Blue eyed boy and this brown eyed girl"